on My Friend? by Blade
15 Nov 2002, 4:39 AM
This putrid pile of festering bile should never have seen the light of day. 0. Add to the equation that if you feel that making friends with an illiterate deserves "poetic" tribute, I conclude that you are one lonely bitch, in addition to being an appalling poet. I bid you good day.
on Necromantic Boo-boo by razorgrin
8 Nov 2002, 7:59 AM
An unfortunate error of judgement, but a decent haiku. 7.
replying on Two Towers by Tascobar
8 Nov 2002, 7:39 AM
No, what is amazing is your clear lack of intellect. Tell me, can you feed yourself?
on Die by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 8:27 AM
The poem gets an 8. Sadly, you get a 0, as I have read a poem bizarrely similar to this before. Sorry, but no points for plagiarism!!!!
replying on boy girl by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 5:42 AM
Someone get this man a dictionary - please. And grammar tuition would also not go amiss.
on boy girl by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 5:39 AM
One of your better efforts. 3.
on I remenber by little_angel_maria
7 Nov 2002, 5:16 AM
Rubbish. 0. If your Dad "holves" you, it sounds as though he should be reported to the relevant authorities. Jesus, your poems' ratings are beginning to resemble binary code.
on Morning Glory by waltfreakinwhitman
30 Oct 2002, 3:33 AM
A truthful account of many, many mornings. 7. I shall assume that most of the "low voters" are female.
on Howl For Clarity (for Jeff Buckley) by Bachus
30 Oct 2002, 3:22 AM
A good effort. 7. Can't fault any kind of tribute to the late great Jeff Buckley. Bravo!
on The Black Hearted Sunflower by anitawit
29 Oct 2002, 8:44 AM
Sorry, I'm a purist. Not a bad poem in itself, but an abhorrent haiku. Have a 0 and learn to OBEY THE RULES!!!!!!!
on Missing You by psychedelic
28 Oct 2002, 4:21 AM
I don't think the last line works, unfortunately. Would have been a good haiku otherwise. Ho hum, such is life..... 4.
on wax by New Life Drug
28 Oct 2002, 4:20 AM
Strange - this doesn't make any kind of sense whatsoever. Would indeed be better for the loss of the last line. 3.
on Coloured waifs home by horus8
24 Oct 2002, 4:32 AM
Not what I expected from the (misspelt) title, but a well pieced haiku nevertheless. Take this 7, and use it well.
And yes, I am a pedant.
And yes, I am a pedant.
replying on The Enslaver of Men by Tascobar
23 Oct 2002, 3:28 AM
Yep, you're right. Should have been "That sweet, sweet poontang".
Still, I think the point gets across adequately
Still, I think the point gets across adequately
replying on AIDS Bonanza! by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
22 Oct 2002, 10:04 AM
Point taken, DA - but I was speaking in general terms. This site has so many Yanks on that I'm beginning to forget what irony is. Ho hum.