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-=Dark_Angel=-, P.I. 163.1.146.114 |
14-Apr-04/7:51 AM |
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You have a soiling for every occasion. If only I had a wipe for every occasion. -10-
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| Re: Under Cans by oftherealm |
edpeterson 68.79.14.47 |
14-Apr-04/8:05 AM |
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| Re: 7 Days of Suicide by dragonfly |
edpeterson 68.79.14.47 |
14-Apr-04/12:44 PM |
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| Re: Tawn-tastic by Topaz Servias |
Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/1:01 PM |
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I'm sorry, but you're not a native french speaker.
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| Re: being human by ggawrysi |
some deleted user 17.255.240.6 |
14-Apr-04/1:55 PM |
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Stanza 2 is true only sometimes. Still some good ideas here.
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some deleted user 208.59.134.37 |
14-Apr-04/4:48 PM |
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just ask your bro for help before you do anything...but it's good
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Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/4:49 PM |
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Use more sound-music besides rhyme in this poem
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| Re: China, Silver, and an Emerald Lipstick by Enkidu |
nentwined 66.92.28.14 |
14-Apr-04/5:08 PM |
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| Re: Blinking by zodiac |
tre 147.9.83.188 |
14-Apr-04/6:05 PM |
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got a kick out of the second to last line :)
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| Re: Dear M Foucault, or, How I knew our relationship was doomed by zodiac |
edpeterson 68.79.14.47 |
14-Apr-04/6:51 PM |
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Fucking hilarious that you chose sestina for the category. AHHAAHHAHHA.
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| Re: Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool |
edpeterson 68.79.14.47 |
14-Apr-04/6:56 PM |
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HAHAHAHAHA. that is some funny ass bullshit kegparty poetry.
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| Re: My Life by Fire_is_cool |
edpeterson 68.79.14.47 |
14-Apr-04/6:59 PM |
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umm if you die, does the tunnel grow an end?
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| Re: Feel the Love by Fire_is_cool |
Fire_is_cool 65.100.213.166 |
14-Apr-04/7:15 PM |
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Sorry I know that it is really lame but hey so I can't write poetry, but at least I'm not the only one that can't.
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Fire_is_cool 65.100.213.166 |
14-Apr-04/7:18 PM |
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Very interestin. Gorilla dicks and cheese twinkies? What is that all about?
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| Re: Unseen Death by Fire_is_cool |
Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/7:19 PM |
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| Re: Life on the Sidewalk (with superfluous vulgarisms) by ?-Dave_Mysterious-? |
Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/7:28 PM |
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Fire_is_cool 65.100.213.166 |
14-Apr-04/7:28 PM |
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I liked your poem. I liked when you talked about the roller coaster. Although I don't like them either.
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Fire_is_cool 65.100.213.166 |
14-Apr-04/7:30 PM |
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I love your poem. It is so true.
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| Re: The Queen & The Locksmith by Jeremi B. Handrinos |
Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/7:30 PM |
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Not Iambic pentameter. Forced. Inverted, introverted. A bad poem in general
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| Re: The Smarts aint Stupids by Shardik |
Sasha 69.140.246.96 |
14-Apr-04/7:32 PM |
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This is not iambic pentameter, rather amateurish in its construction, and, above all, makes no sense.
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