horus8
on some deleted poem
28 Mar 2003, 9:08 PM
Rabbit stew.
nice
VERY IMPRESSIVE, BUT A BIT BORING.
Good grief.
nice :)
LMFAO!!!!!!!!!
'as every...' is a strong line, Nntwnd. I think there's more to this poem in your head; I'd like to read it.
Blind project's right guys! Wow! What a clear and obviously wonderful spun around idea, unless saddam's gay then you're gay and we're'll doomed. Cheers Blind project! You win the horus8 "I quote the bible award to project my deepest darkest fears and misconceptions in order to divert the attention to everything i have not taking even a glimpse of time to understand, and from my own actions". Now ironically, you Bush, and Saddam, all have something clinical in common other then finger banging your own asses while you shower under the pretense that cleanliness in godliness. That would be faggotry to the 'enth degree of pecker and boob covering to the likes of which even Ashcrofts office has yet to witness. Button pushers and sissys the lot of you.
Fag killer. Tough guy. Bible quoter. Chirp.
Ha Ha! asl. This is my United states of renigger.
The good part must come after the ........ huh?
I'm kind of like han solo. Always playing with my wookie. my name is jimmy pop bitch, but you can call me cookie.
Your name's not Jeremi dick chin. Although, there is a ten year old kurd in a cave in Northern Iraq named Dick Cheney and one on the way (a baby, for some reason the poorer more vulnerable to disease and war you are in thirld world countryies, or anywhere really, the more children you have? Darwanism me thinks) named George Bush, so I guess anything's possible.
Fascinating
Alas, I'm afraid these aren't your best, darlink. 1's alright, 2's somewhat obscure and boring, and 3's nothing special. Though funny.
Is Hank one of your acquaintances? If so, please don't tell me which one.
This poem is written in a much more free, undetered style than your others, and I like that a lot. Details such as "Panties on the floor, a sock on the nightstand," were awesome and really generated feelings for me. But I think you should have used that more. Some of the metaphors and imagery didn't help me at all to grasp the feeling you were trying to get across, whereas, the details about what the narrator was leaving at home, really gave me something. I think also, some of the semicolons were unecessary. Overall, this poem is pretty good, but it would be better if you'd kept the freer language flowing throughout.
AT LAST SOMETHING IN THE WAY OF DECENT.
Glad your working on new peversions but... I agree these aren't your best but I realise it must be a hard to come up unusal fetishes and five line ways to describe them. -8-
P.S. I know someone who can do the last one. He says it gives him a cramp in the neck.
Alright zz66 Ill break it down for you, first off, what you said about God making homos and it being alright is a lie, I don?t know who told you that or maybe you saw two male dogs humping each other and took a mental note, but your wrong. Even if there is homosexuality in nature it doesn?t matter. You see we humans have something animals do not, that is a soul. We also have comprehension of things like god and right and wrong, a dog knows its wrong to crap on the carpet only because he has been taught that if he does he will receive punishment. We as humans have a conscience and know instinctively what is wrong and right. Getting back to the point, Here is what the Bible has to say about homosexuality,
"Do not lie with a man as one lies with a woman; that is detestable" (Leviticus 18:22) and
"If a man lies with a man as one lies with a woman, both of them have done what is detestable. They must be put to death; their blood will be on their own heads" (Leviticus 20:13) and
In the same way the men also abandoned natural relations with women and were inflamed with lust for one another. Men committed indecent acts with other men, and received in themselves the due penalty for their perversion" (Romans 1:26-27).
I don?t know how anyone in their right minds who would, after reading these passages think that homosexuality is acceptable.
Getting on with the next point,
<No, it doesn?t depend on how you view it. No matter how you look at it, it is still evil, >
What I mean is, sin is still sin, no matter how YOU look at it. Killing the Iraqis is not a sin because they are the ones who attacked us first. They funded terrorists that killed 2000 of our citizens, it might as well been Saddam flying the plane. It is now our right to avenge our dead. God also says that it is our obligation to stop evil around the world. And that is exactly what we are doing.
<The Iraqis were just minding their own business and then BAM here comes America with their big guns their banners of freedom and wealth. I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business, what happens when the law is determined by your beliefs, there is a word for that its called ANARCHY!!>
This last statement was what liberals like yourself all around America are saying, <the Iraqis were just minding their own business and then BAM here comes America with their big guns their banners of freedom and wealth.> They don?t think we have the right to protect ourselves against terrorists, they say that it can all be ?Resolved? I say the only way to resolve this conflict is to dig out all the hiding Iraqi leaders from their little holes and then bury them again.
<I cant help thinking that this country is slowly dying and the masses don?t give a damn, they are content to live their lives and stay out of other peoples business,>
The average teenager doesn?t know anything about politics and are content to stay that way. They don?t know what?s really going on over in Iraq all they know is what they are fed. They take all they hear and believe it because they only get one side of the story. And that story doesn?t include morals or God, it says ?America is greedy and wants more oil and is masking it by saying that Iraq is a threat to our everyday life.? On a side note, if you don?t believe me go online and check any survey on what teens know about politics. Half of teens can?t even tell you who our vice president is. That is shameful.
ZZ66, next time get some proof to back up your arguments. If your going to bring up what God thinks about things then you better be able to back it up with his own words, also known as the Bible.
Fascinating