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daniella on The Hand of God by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:05 PM
how we try to image Him into our humanity.... He is always ready, are we willing?
daniella on Instructions to a Sculptor by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:13 PM
a tribute to all us rankers. i etched somewhere near the heart and diaphragm.
daniella on Gone Away by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:23 PM
my heart murmurs in the ticking away, roundabout clockwise.
daniella on Do Swans Get Jealous? (#2) by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:28 PM
hyde parked?
daniella on some deleted poem 19 Oct 2002, 9:54 PM
my thoughts form in this inside-out way. kind-(bright)-red spirit.
daniella on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit 19 Oct 2002, 10:10 PM
how the angst gets top rank in our darkened nights. waiting for the light and day to pronounce victorious over all of us.
daniella on Noblesse Oblige by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:15 PM
this could be a film, for its 24xsecond imaging in my eye. keep rolling.
daniella on Trespasser at the Men's Bathing Pond by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:20 PM
when the steam dissipates, me thinks he will remain pondering his rippling flesh, looking no deeper than his bones.
daniella on Our New Tongue by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:30 PM
you too know of love lost and lament. the heart beats heartier every time as the light of love dims.... be not afraid of offering another lick.
daniella on Like and Unlike by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:31 PM
watched closely. i would love to see you sketching these as you watch ever so closely.
daniella on On the Swings by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 9:51 PM
hmmm a playful warning/promise towards oblivion or bliss?!
daniella on Circle by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:25 PM
i did turn it once. but got locked out.
daniella on Belongings by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 10:27 PM
breaking up is hard to do, so get your stuff b4 you end it through and through.
Tintagiles on HELP by LIL ZAY 19 Oct 2002, 7:18 PM
Department of Guardian Angels Cloud 6 Heaven Dear LIL ZAY: We're afraid that your angel met with an accident; he was run over by a cement truck while sneaking away from you to go urinate. Unfortunately, we're rather understaffed right now, so it will be some time before we can get around to helping you. In fact, we may not be able to. We did ask for volunteers, but though one showed up, your obnoxious use of capitals turned him off -- he's rather delicate ears and didn't want to be yelled at all day. You could always ask the Devil -- he's rather a decent fellow if you ask the right way. Regretfully, Saint Gabriel Archangel Spokesperson for God Department of Guardian Angels Cloud 6 Heaven.
Tintagiles on Unpleasant Morning by liljsmith87 19 Oct 2002, 7:20 PM
When I first saw this, for a second I thought it said 'Got up this morning,/Killed the cat...' It might be even funnier if you wrote a poem starting like that.
god'swife on Cancer Haikus by poetandknowit 19 Oct 2002, 8:06 PM
Somehow I overlooked these. Semillas de tus agonias. 2 nights ago I met a boy who's mother died when he was sixteen. I said that must of been awful, and he replied ' I was 16, I hated her'.
daniella on The Thought Of It by Christof 19 Oct 2002, 9:45 PM
pure imagery, sends me back to memories. fine and true.
daniella on some deleted poem 19 Oct 2002, 9:49 PM
i do believe you know that man and his boy. keep bringing them home this way.
daniella on some deleted poem 19 Oct 2002, 9:40 PM
what it is to be a woman-child-mother-daughter all wrapped up in this time-machine looking glass indeed!
daniella on Old Man Me by OneFingerAnswer 19 Oct 2002, 10:08 PM
no time to lament!