Potential schmotential. Is this poetentialranker? Or poemeranker?

You're not insane. If you were insane you would be far more creative.

Pfff. "Love" is the opposite of freedom.

Thanks zz!

This would make a great song - early Dylan kind of thing.

Pffff. A poem about the third man objection might have been interesting, but this one isn't. What's interesting about this poem is that it manages to convince people it is interesting.

Ha ha ha. Thank god yoda's aprentice is still here. With Poetie and Twisted Wizard MIA we'd nearly run out of indignant teenagers to angrily defend their shitfests. You're a dick. You suck. Go fuck yourself. etc.

Embalmer are great. They also write about lingering, painful deaths. I'm sure they could help you come to terms with your loss!

Are you married, Christof? Gutted.

You're just following people whom you dislike and contradicting everything they say. This poeme is awful. You know it, I know it; even kristen here knows it. So let's just be mature about it, OK? Great!

a momentary lack of creativity plus my overwhelming sense of boredom makes for a dangerous and deadly bout of verbal moonshine.

all I have to say is this, and that is any type of skank pie (personally, I prefer strawberry), the worst part of the pie is the crust...

Thanks DA, you are probably right. Maybe I should call old Eddie today and see if he has any time free. This is one of your more asinine comments. But it seemed to be shot off in a rash of asinine comments.

this language suits you. this does not feel forced; it is easy to read, and i can tell you enjoyed writing it. more like this, please

I know the feeling exactly. I wish you'd gone for a more regular rhyme scheme or something to tie it all together, but I get the message loud and clear.

Holy Christ. That makes me feel quite strange. Yikes. I need a cold shower.

The second two lines redeem the first, which are confused. By the end though, I'm smitten too.

In what way are you Macbeth? Have you just been off killing kings? Seeing your best friend's ghost? Meeting witches? What?? This infuriates me.

very good. I like the way the alternating long/short lines reflect the breathing and the sensuality of the smoke. Not that i condone such a revolting habit. Just say no, kids.

female descendants in our Family get guns. Not quite as cuddly, but tis better to shed bullets than tears, my dear.