See the Bitch! poem comment of using a title as a final tag line and ultimately a young cop out for a poem that would probably work better as a lyric.

Nutty and impressive (in the way that it leaves an impression). I like the unusual formatting. On the downside, I feel like there is an oversimplification, or a misunderstanding someplace; just a feeling.

Is this a poem or simply a collection of statements with a tag line at the end? I need to know.

The fact that Z has to send/post a picture of the event for the poem to really to take hold hurts the poem. Maybe you could give the reader just a bit more to make it make sense of what and why it (i.e. “Nature” is being said. I am afraid that the name just doesn’t cut it. Of course, I am sure hatter’s hare will disagree, but what does she know, she only drinks pilsner. I think we get that idea when we look at the picture, but alone I think the poem fails. Initially I was afraid you had holed up in the john with a tattered copy of “Iron John”.

Daring!!!!! Original!~!!! Super!!!!

Considering it is painfully obvious from your imagery that you have never hunted before and are relying of clichéd observations from your past and maybe the dictionary, the fact that you use it as the base metaphor for what you are trying to say is, how I should put this, ridiculous. Thanks for you time. Rally other than that it is quite lovely. And such original thinking.

enjoyable read, blessed with 9.

Quasi bombastic leave blower. And extra onions.

unfallable.