Tintagiles
on Thunder by Normo
23 Oct 2002, 7:04 AM
Dear God.
Very nice. glee!
'devil may cry' is a thoroughly sweet game.
Were that a proper haiku, i'd dance with glee. But it's fun nonetheless.
Well ring-a-ding-ding, a crap-ass teenage love ramble from highschool bard and goddess of cyber-lovin' Maria. And it sucks as much as her other stuff? Watch me gasp in mock shock! 0.
Dude, what have you been smoking?
Pretty good, though, and the scantion isn't too bad either!
kickin' ass and chewing bubble gum (and you're all out of gum). Rockin' my socks.10. Only it's spelled "cthulhu".Still kicks more ass than hobos in that "Bumfight" thing.
The title is abominable. Quite. It sets us up for a nice little comedy, and instead we get this. Pah.
Cromwell was a great socialist. He's the only person in history to manage to get the English, Scots and Irish to agree on something and work together. Unfortunately for him, that thing was hatred of Cromwell. Oh well, you can't have everything, I guess.
Now this, this one I like. Quite a bit.
No glasses here, amusingly sick you are.
Yeah buddy!
Wierd. Some potential.
The fact that it actually sounds like a set of instructions makes it gain a lot. Quite wondrous. Cheers.
'A broken spine of cloud' is genius. Sheer.
Not at all. It's quite unusual for someone to pick up the buried humour in my stuff, I'm glad you did.
This is rather amusing. I hope that's not a bad comment.
You get many points for using light-years correctly. And more because it's good.
I'd settle for a bridge or a fireplace, but I couldn't fit them in my flat.
Why thank you. This is the oldest thing I have on poemranker, and so it's very gratifying when people like it.