on Melancholy Tale by aperfecttool77
27 Jan 2003, 10:00 AM
why did I read this? well, I didn't: I stopped at the trite questions.
on My bedtime story by famenglory
27 Jan 2003, 10:00 AM
doesn't do it for me. too klunky.
replying on The Magical Hairy Chair by Nagi
27 Jan 2003, 9:58 AM
bravo. :)
replying on one moment to the other by nentwined
27 Jan 2003, 9:22 AM
well, I must say I appreciate the 8. I wouldn't mind posting more, myself, but it's rare that I actually have anything that I think might have a chance at being interesting to say. :)
replying on one moment to the other by nentwined
27 Jan 2003, 8:49 AM
aha, but it's really yesterday's. no dates on the "most recent" really makes things a bit surreal.
but thank you muchly just the same. :) [gobbles the 7 happily]
but thank you muchly just the same. :) [gobbles the 7 happily]
on Small Town Tavern by NinjaPoet
26 Jan 2003, 12:00 PM
I wasn't sure where it was going, but I like where it ended. The middle was... eh. but good for the contrast, I suppose.
on Jesus was the Antichrist by TheDevil
26 Jan 2003, 11:56 AM
eh. not horribly amusing.
on Stars of the sky by GTK
26 Jan 2003, 11:56 AM
ow.
on Why my cock attracts idiots by horus8
26 Jan 2003, 8:31 AM
lol! asl! I am a mockery of mocking myself mocking mockery? 7.
on Perfect by wordontheverge
26 Jan 2003, 8:27 AM
revist?
not a fan of this style.
not a fan of this style.
on mornings, january by <~>
26 Jan 2003, 8:21 AM
I like how the third line sets scale when none was there before. :)
on The Ode that never was by Shardik
26 Jan 2003, 8:20 AM
nicely done, for what it is. :) the only bit o' weakness I felt be the toad, and 'm not quite sure what.
on Jeremi and my cat oh and Elton by w~* ATHENA *~w
26 Jan 2003, 7:30 AM
I'm with JC on this one. ish.
on alms by famenglory
26 Jan 2003, 7:24 AM
cute. 7.
on Forgotten by famenglory
26 Jan 2003, 7:22 AM
ugh. 2
on the play by famenglory
26 Jan 2003, 7:21 AM
could use some serious work on delivery, I think. it's cute, but it doesn't flow, and that loses it for me. 4
replying on one moment to the other by nentwined
26 Jan 2003, 7:13 AM
hmm. okay.
this is basically meant to be a look at life, time, and memory. moments.
short moments, the little things from the typing of one letter to the next... are insignificant and tend to be forgotten.
moments also tend to be forgotten in long periods of time -- from birth to death, for instance, or... say, just twenty years. or that alzheimer's ditty someone posted.
just trying to put things in some sort of perspective (but pointedly, or lazily, leaving out the "middle" where things "matter").
I suppose I didn't do such a good job with the poem, though, if that's not there to be read.
this is basically meant to be a look at life, time, and memory. moments.
short moments, the little things from the typing of one letter to the next... are insignificant and tend to be forgotten.
moments also tend to be forgotten in long periods of time -- from birth to death, for instance, or... say, just twenty years. or that alzheimer's ditty someone posted.
just trying to put things in some sort of perspective (but pointedly, or lazily, leaving out the "middle" where things "matter").
I suppose I didn't do such a good job with the poem, though, if that's not there to be read.
on early morning write by crimzon
26 Jan 2003, 7:06 AM
this stumbles for me near 'belated', or perhaps 'today' -- one syllable too many?
ever patient should by hyphenated, I think.
"stealing its blanket of twilight" doesn't quite scan right, either.
I like this a lot, though. 8.
ever patient should by hyphenated, I think.
"stealing its blanket of twilight" doesn't quite scan right, either.
I like this a lot, though. 8.