on The Brigadier's Motto by wFraser Allonby Q.C.w
23 Apr 2004, 9:43 AM
http://www.landoverbaptist.org/news0104/ps2.html
replying on Radiation Reflections by sarah
23 Apr 2004, 9:38 AM
Make your eyes look at this:
1. The quirky use of "as they pleases" instead of "as they please" to force a rhyme with the word "diseases" sounds like something Dr Seuss might have written;
2. The idea of a person's "organs" getting "the wheezes" sounds like the ill-advised joke of a red-faced provincial vicar;
3. The description of dying and being deposited in a mortuary as being "filched" to the "freezers" looks as though it was intended to raise a laugh;
4. The rest of the poem is similarly funny.
Are you genuine in saying that this poem was not intended to be light-hearted and/or amusing?
1. The quirky use of "as they pleases" instead of "as they please" to force a rhyme with the word "diseases" sounds like something Dr Seuss might have written;
2. The idea of a person's "organs" getting "the wheezes" sounds like the ill-advised joke of a red-faced provincial vicar;
3. The description of dying and being deposited in a mortuary as being "filched" to the "freezers" looks as though it was intended to raise a laugh;
4. The rest of the poem is similarly funny.
Are you genuine in saying that this poem was not intended to be light-hearted and/or amusing?
on falling in with the wrong crowd. by richa
23 Oct 2003, 6:44 AM
-good-
on http://www.aljazeera.net by Wobble McFly
23 Oct 2003, 6:43 AM
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
80FC7D69
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
MEDIOCRITY CODE
80FC7D69
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
on Autumn At All Saints Church by Caducus
23 Oct 2003, 6:34 AM
WOW!!!!!11
MEDIOCRITY CODE
00801400
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
INSUFFICIENTLY MEDIOCRE
-3-
MEDIOCRITY CODE
00801400
http://www.mycgiserver.com/~prawne/code.
INSUFFICIENTLY MEDIOCRE
-3-
replying on гоÑÑдаÑÑÑва by Wobble McFly
14 Oct 2003, 6:55 AM
Although I think "оÑганизаÑоÑÑкие" is better translated as "weatherproof antelope"
replying on гоÑÑдаÑÑÑва by Wobble McFly
14 Oct 2003, 6:54 AM
That's a pretty good translation.
I admire your ability!!!!!!!!!11111111111111111
HHHHEEEEEEEUUUUUURRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHAAAA
I admire your ability!!!!!!!!!11111111111111111
HHHHEEEEEEEUUUUUURRRRRRRGGGGGGHHHHHHAAAA
replying on The Waiting Room by -=Dark_Angel=-, P.I.
4 Sep 2003, 1:43 AM
Dear SupremeDreamer,
You are su-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-ch a cu-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-nt.
Good day sir!
You are su-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-ch a cu-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-u-nt.
Good day sir!
on Memoirs of a Monk - St. Screamer by SupremeDreamer
17 Jul 2003, 3:31 AM
Very good. You are making huge strides forward. Keep up the good work. 10
on A load of bollocks - literally!!! by Yardbird
11 Jul 2003, 2:49 AM
Very
on OK, I apologize - it's steaming shite and no mistake, but it was the best I could come up with on the spur of the moment. I'm off to slit my wrists now, since writer's block has sent me spiralling into the depths of the deepest depression in human history... by Yardbird
11 Jul 2003, 2:48 AM
Get out of the Top Twenty and stay out!
on Nothing you can say by Rodavlas
11 Jul 2003, 1:38 AM
I'm going to make you eat your poems so that you can discover what shit tastes like.
on On A Night Like This by bazz
11 Jul 2003, 1:36 AM
RUBBISH
She was a dirty whore anyway, and she cheated on you twice without you ever knowing.
She was a dirty whore anyway, and she cheated on you twice without you ever knowing.
on How To Make Up Without Saying I'm Sorry by OnTheOtherHand
11 Jul 2003, 1:34 AM
This is rubbish. I think you should rewrite the first stanza as follows:
I could still convince myself to be gay
I could make myself if I wanted to
But you'll have to get out of my way
I could still convince myself to be gay
I could make myself if I wanted to
But you'll have to get out of my way
on Quisling & white wine by horus8
11 Jul 2003, 1:26 AM
Interesting
on Skull fucking Miggy, a list, by Iggy Poppy by Bachus
11 Jul 2003, 1:24 AM
Number 11 on your list should read "King James" not "St James" you INFIDEL
on all american machine by nolan
10 Jul 2003, 1:38 PM
FUCKING COMMUNIST GARBAGE
on Nigger Hole by horus8
10 Jul 2003, 1:24 PM
THIS IS THE BEST POEM YOU HAVE EVER WRITTEN
on TPBOD Joins a pack of wolves by Luzr
10 Jul 2003, 9:52 AM
Ha ha! So you're the Poet Formerly Known as Simple Dimple! You fucking faggot! I never guessed that thepinkfuckingbunnyofdoom possessed an inane devotion to meaningless quotation of truisms.