I thought of it more as a kid waiting to ask why his (or her) parents were doing it. I think it's the keyhole thing that made me think child.

Titus Crow Vol I and II were both great (Each contains two stories). The Fruting Bodies collection of short stories is also very good. The House Of Doors and its sequal, The Maze Of Worlds were very enjoyable and the Hero Of Dreams series is fantastic. I would guess, however, that what you were refering to is the Necroscope series. I don't enjoy that series simply becuase of the subject matter. It was still well written as all his works are.

Howard Phillips Lovecraft is the better of the two writers but both are great.

Congrats J.B. You're well read. Yes it's borrowed from H.P., Brian Lumley, the Necronomicon, and such.

No I wouldn't rather you ignored it. I'm sorry I came off that way but I just got dumped yesterday (hence the poem). I'm still a little pissed at being told that I am now single through an e-mail. I appriciate help with my poems but it just seemed a little harsh.... Thanks for trying.

Line and stanza breaks are up to the writer. Just because I didn't do it the same way you did doesn't mean it's an error.

As for most of your other changes, I don't think so. SOme of them are nice but not what I intended.

And I ask you: Are the typos so many and so strong that you cannot get meaning? For that is what a typo riddled poem would be. Are you so distracted by a missing n or a stray comma that you cannot read through it and see something on the other side? Does it raise a question that requires much thought from you? I truely hope you are not so puzzled by a few typos.

And again I ask you: Why not be helpful and point them out? Why instead simply tell of their existence?

Ummm... I thought you'd say it. Not about this one but I know you give credit where you think it's due.

I actually don't like this one much and I wanted help with it.

Perhaps... I'll consider it. Thank you. (By the by I can't really be angry at the Brits; they make some of the best damn beers in the world)

lol Sorry bout that. I was only joking any way. Cheers.

Thanks again. I guess I should stop typing late at night eh?

Thanks for the proof read.

As for the movie reference, haven't seen it. Amish? I don't get it.

Love, my friend, is something very personal. It can be a positive thing like for one of my friends, a negitive one like for another (the one in this poem), or a mixture of both as it has been for me. I don't think it's a specific environment or circumstance at all. As for using it as a breeding ground, I think not. Love for the child certianly helps but romantic love is often a temporary thing. Not something to be relied on and definatly not something to base another human's life on.

Quit being a Brit. Apologize is a proper spelling. If you can't get over a single letter then take your thumb and stick it in the centre of your arse.

You are such a liar.

Using the word silly when it's said with spite is childish? I don't think so. If you can think of a better word I'll thank you but I think it fits fine.

Congrats you're the millionth person to not read the other comments. I tried editing it and it didn't take. I don't care to try again. Get off my ass.

Yes eyes can be fooled. They often fool themselves but I'd much rather have fooled eyes that believe something on false proof than have no eye acccept something on blind faith.

I'm glad you like it. :)

"He" is the subject of the poem. Of course "He" is going to show up. Not to mention that the point of a vilanelle is repetition.